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Niente by ~Ckn-bonbon:iconCkn-bonbon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Family Life > Open


Waiting.
I am debating.
Should I tell you?
Or will it be hell for me?

Slouching.
I am crouching.
Picking up the pieces,
of a love now lost.


Denying.
It is trying.
To be near, but so far.
I guess you don't get it.

Hoping.
Can't help but start groping.
Feeling my way, down a long mindway,
of darkness and blinding light.

Being.
It is nothing like seeing.
Seeing you wave goodbye,
for the last time.
Gone.
©2008-2009 ~Ckn-bonbon
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Author's Comments

This is a story of a relationship. They loved each other to get married, then they went through a rough patch. Then they don't know what happened to one another; they have changed since those many years ago. Then, when they part ways, he has to go to war, and he doesn't come back. In the end, she wonders if he loved her as much as she did in the end.

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Mood: Sentimental ~XiX-New-One-XiX Nov 7, 2008, 3:07:40 PM
OMG OMG OMG OMG *Faints in awe*

Beautiful, Çhaye!!!

I lovers it ^^

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Now, Officially a member of TheFallenExistence!!!
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~vampirical-kitty Nov 8, 2008, 12:29:45 AM
Nawwh, That is fantastic!!

:heart:

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What Ya Gonna Do About It?!
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~Ckn-bonbon Nov 10, 2008, 5:13:16 AM
LMAO. TankOohs. :heart: Luvs you Ajabear.

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<{[.Çhaye.]}>
"I don't believe in Beatles, I just believe in me"
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~Ckn-bonbon Nov 10, 2008, 5:14:19 AM
Awwsss! TanksOohs Brado.
:heart: :iconhuggleplz: Yooh's to nice to me!!
Oh yeah? I lovers you! :boogie: :P

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<{[.Çhaye.]}>
"I don't believe in Beatles, I just believe in me"
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~XiX-New-One-XiX Nov 10, 2008, 1:02:14 PM
:aww: *blushes*

I try to be nice to alot of people ^^

:iconhuggleplz:

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When Life throws problems at you, throw them back!!!

Now, Officially a member of TheFallenExistence!!!
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~Ckn-bonbon Nov 10, 2008, 1:29:07 PM
Yus. I can tell. <3

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<{[.Çhaye.]}>
"I don't believe in Beatles, I just believe in me"
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~XiX-New-One-XiX Nov 10, 2008, 11:02:06 PM
^^ <3

--
When Life throws problems at you, throw them back!!!

Now, Officially a member of TheFallenExistence!!!
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~Ckn-bonbon Nov 11, 2008, 4:23:06 AM
Lmao.

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<{[.Çhaye.]}>
"I don't believe in Beatles, I just believe in me"
:iconxix-new-one-xix:
~XiX-New-One-XiX Nov 11, 2008, 1:17:32 PM
:shrug: well, i couldnt think of anything else to write. :aww:

--
When Life throws problems at you, throw them back!!!

Now, Officially a member of TheFallenExistence!!!
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